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October 27th, 2009 by Joe Nassise
Story Structure and NaNoWriMo

With November less than a week away, I thought I would use my column this week to provide a little assistance to those who are attempting NaNoWriMo.

For those of you who aren’t familiar with the term, NaNoWriMo is short for National Novel Writing Month.  Every November more than 100,000 people try to write a short (50,000 word) novel between midnight on Nov 1st and midnight on Nov 30th.

In the words of the program’s founders:

Valuing enthusiasm and perseverance over painstaking craft, NaNoWriMo is a novel-writing program for everyone who has thought fleetingly about writing a novel but has been scared away by the time and effort involved.

Because of the limited writing window, the ONLY thing that matters in NaNoWriMo is output. It’s all about quantity, not quality. The kamikaze approach forces you to lower your expectations, take risks, and write on the fly.

Make no mistake: You will be writing a lot of crap. And that’s a good thing. By forcing yourself to write so intensely, you are giving yourself permission to make mistakes. To forgo the endless tweaking and editing and just create. To build without tearing down.

As you spend November writing, you can draw comfort from the fact that, all around the world, other National Novel Writing Month participants are going through the same joys and sorrows of producing the Great Frantic Novel. Wrimos meet throughout the month to offer encouragement, commiseration, and—when the thing is done—the kind of raucous celebrations that tend to frighten animals and small children.

I unofficially participated in NaNoWriMo back in 2006 and 2007.  This year, I’m going to be doing so on a more formal basis, joining the ranks and posting my daily word counts to keep me pushing forward on a new work I’d like to see completed before the end of the year.

One thing I learned from previous attempts to write a novel in thirty days is that you need to be prepared ahead of time.  The more prep work you do, the easier it is to meet your writing goals each and every day, which, of course, means you have a greater chance of completing the challenge overall.

I’ve heard many a would-be NaNoWriMoer (is that even a word/) state that their storyline just sort of fizzled out after a week’s worth of effort, that they didn’t know where to take it from there.  Their failure is not due to a lack of effort, but rather a lack of understanding the structure of stories in general and a lack of applying that structure to the work they are doing.

So, in order to help my fellow NaNoWriMoers (I’ve decided it is now a word, so there!) come to grips with their stories ahead of time, here is a basic structure that you can find in many successful stories today and which might help you plan for the challenge ahead.

Step 1:  Characters, Conflict, and Major Story Goal are introduced

At the very beginning of your story, the characters, the opposition/conflict, and the overall goal of the tale are introduced.

Step 2: Characters begin their journey

The characters will begin consciously or unconsciously making preparations for the “journey” or adventure that they will be undergoing throughout the tale.  A deeper sense of their abilities and motivations is given to the reader during this section, a means of letting the reader “get to know them” better.

Step 3: First Goal is determined

The characters make a decision to take some action relative to helping them reach the story goal.  That goal is identified for the reader, as are the reasons behind it.

Step 4: Actions are taken to reach that goal

The characters take some action designed to bring them closer to the goal outlined in the previous step.

Step 5: Characters are prevented from reaching their first goal

The first goal is thwarted, either through the actions of the opposition or some other circumstances that are not under the characters’ control.

Step 6: Characters react

The characters react to the fact that they failed to reach their goal.

Step 7: Stakes are raised

The stakes the characters are facing if they do not reach the story goal are raised, which in turn raises the tension and excitement of the story for the reader.  This is also where the characters react to the raising of the stakes.

Step 8: A new (second) goal is developed

Determined not to let one set-back prevent them from reaching their goal, the characters develop a new, larger goal (since the stakes are now higher.)

Step 9: Actions are taken to reach the second goal

The characters take some action designed to bring them closer to the goal outlined in the previous step.

Step 10: Characters are prevented from reaching their second goal

The second goal is thwarted, again either through the actions of the opposition or some other circumstances that are not under the characters’ control.

Step 11: Characters react

The characters react to the fact that they failed to reach their goal for the second time.

Step 12: Stakes are raised

The stakes become even higher, with greater consequences in the event of failure.   The characters react to this change.

Step 13: Low Moment Begins

At this point the characters are feeling their failures.  They are demoralized and uncertain just what to do next.  Some may even be on the verge of giving up.  It is only the high stakes that keep them in the game now.

Step 14: Third Goal is developed

With uncertainty and confusion running rampant, the characters try to rally and push onward.  A new goal is developed, though this time the specter of failure looms close at hand.

Step 15: Actions are taken despite uncertainty

Determined not to give up without a fight, the characters push through and attempt to reach the goal one more time, despite the fact that their chances of success look slimmer by the minute.

Step 16: Dark Time Begins

The characters fail miserably and the terrible circumstances they have been trying to avoid seem all too likely.

Step 17: Characters react to the dark time

Despair sets in as the characters reach their lowest emotional point in the story.  Everything they feared is about to come to pass and they seem to be completely out of options.  The stakes are at a fever pitch by this point.

Step 18: Pivotal change occurs

A crucial event takes place that makes the character’s all too well aware that they don’t have the option of failing.  Maybe their lives are on the line.  Maybe it is the life of a loved one or the fate of the entire world.  Whatever it is, the characters must face it and decide that they have to give it go or die trying.

Step 19: Goals are revised one last time

For the last time, the characters set a goal and go for it with all they’ve got.

Step 20: Final showdown happens, the opposition is defeated and the characters react to their success

The characters face off against the opposition and this they succeed.  The opposition is defeated and they are left to figure out just where they go from here.

So there you have it, a twenty step, tried and true plot structure that you can use to plan your NaNoWriMo novel ahead of time and be ready to go when the clock strikes midnight on Sunday.

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13 comments to “Story Structure and NaNoWriMo”

  1. Candace Havens
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 12:50 pm · Link

    Joe, This is a fantastic post. And I’m sending the link to my writing students. :)

    -Candy Havens :grin:



  2. Joe Nassise
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 12:56 pm · Link

    Glad you liked it, Candy. And send away to any and all you think will benefit!



  3. Dennis Meyer
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 1:52 pm · Link

    Great posting. I’m participating in NaNoWriMo for the first time this year and will definitely have a print out of this on my bulletin board to keep me focused.

    Thanks!

    -Dennis



    • Joe Nassise
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       · October 27th, 2009 at 8:54 pm · Link

      Dennis – good luck with your story! Remember, NaNoWriMo is all about getting the first pass out. It doesn’t have to be perfect – don’t interrupt your creative flow by editing.



  4. Suzan H.
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 2:20 pm · Link

    Great tips, Joe!

    Sure beats my method for last year’s NaNo–when things get boring, kill off a minor character.



    • Joe Nassise
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       · October 27th, 2009 at 8:54 pm · Link

      I don’t know Suzan – that move has worked just fine for me for several books now!



  5. Sasha White
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 4:29 pm · Link

    Awesome post, Joe! Not only will it help me, but I posted a link to it on Twitter, and got many thanks for sharing. You’ve got a lot of people thinking and planning now.



    • Joe Nassise
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       · October 27th, 2009 at 8:55 pm · Link

      Thanks for tweeting it, Sasha! Much obliged and glad it was helpful.



  6. Jenna Reynods
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 4:48 pm · Link

    Thanks for providing this! :smile:



  7. Esther
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     · October 27th, 2009 at 8:52 pm · Link

    Wow! I’ve been taking extensive (but unfocused) notes on my NaNo story for a few months now, but tonight I sat down, following this list and now have a comprehensive, five-plus-page outline of the whole thing. My story works now! Thanks so much for such a great post.



    • Joe Nassise
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       · October 27th, 2009 at 8:56 pm · Link

      That’s excellent, Esther! Glad it was so helpful.



  8. Ashley
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     · October 28th, 2009 at 5:47 am · Link

    Great post, of course the best part is when a story just builds its momemtum naturally, but it is always good to have a basic structure in your head. Especially important for students who struggle to connect their ideas. Well done.



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