“Sex acts don’t drive erotica, the people who engage in them do.”
– Hanne Blank, Some Frank Tips For The Aspiring Author
In my opinion, the main key to building a writing career is being able to see your problems for yourself, and to fix them. An agent or an editor will only help you so much because it’s not their job to create a great story. That is the authors job, and an author needs to know enough about story structure and the craft of writing to spot the weaknesses, in a story, and how to fix it. I know, strange advice coming from me, the queen of ‘winging it’, but it’s true. I might not be a huge reader of craft books, but I talk about it a lot with others, and I learn not only from reading my favorite books and analyzing, but from my own mistakes.
In my mind there are two core elements of storytelling. Character and Plot. There are a ton of sub-elements like setting, conflict, atmosphere, theme….but in my mind those are all sub-parts, and they don’t really matter if you don’t get the top two right. .
So let’s start with Characters.
You have to know your character in order to be able to share them with the world via a story, and you have to know them WELL in order to share them completely. If you don’t know them, how is the reader going to?
There are a few different ways to get ot know your characters better.
Me? I like the FREEWRITE method. This means I sit down in front of a blank screen, set a timer for 20 minutes, and write something, anything, in that characters POV.
You can do it for any amount of time, but I suggest you don’t try it for shorter than fifteen minutes, as it often takes at least five to actually get in to the flow of writing. I like this method for a couple of reasons.
*I always learn something surprising about the character because once I get going it almost becomes like I’m channeling them instead of creating them.
*Nine times out of ten I can use what I come up with in my actual story.
Another way to get to know your characters and get in their head is to do a CHARACTER SKETCH, or to INTERVIEW them. Just be sure that these things cover more than basics like hair and eye color. Be sure to ask not just what they do for a living, but who they are, who their best friend is, do they have friends? If no, why not? What does your character want, and why can’t they have what they want?
Which leads us to Obstacles and Conflict, two things that are key to a good plot.
OBSTACLES can be things in the way of what they want, or things they might lose if they go after what they want.
The best CONFLICT in a story is one that gives the character a choice where there is no right or wrong, but instead where there is a difficult choice-one where the reader can not predict exactly what the character will do, and one where the final choice can change the characters as a person.
Our characters come from our imagination, we give them names, jobs, desires and foibles. They have good traits and bad, they are not flat, or one dimensional – at least we don’t want them to be! We want them to be three-dimensional. In order to accomplish that they have to grow and change, the same way we do.
“Let them live. Let them breathe,” Dr.Lyle says when talking about character at last years Novelist Inc Confernce. “Then pressure them into changing.”
Why should we pressure them into change? Because people don’t change unless they have to. Pressure makes things move and people change, which is why we throw obstacles in front of our characters.
It doesn’t matter if you’re writing erotica, or young adult, thrillers or science-fiction, the core basics of a good story are the same. Character, and Plot. The two elements work together, and if you want to be a successful author, you have to find a way to understand how, so you can always strive to write a better story without depending on others to tell you where you’re going right, and where you’re going wrong.